Saturday, November 28, 2009

NaNoWriMo to the Finish


Well...I won. That's right, I managed to write those precious 50,00 + words in a month. Well, less than a month. I started three days late and ended two days early so I did it in...25 days. Cool.

With my first NaNoWriMo victory under my belt, I may just have to do it again. I mean, I didn't really think I was capable of writing that much in a month and now that I know that I can well--I think my writing can improve from there. Thinking you can do something and knowing you can are two different things after all.

Anywho, it's really put things into perspective this win. If I can do this, what else can I do that I have put off thinking I couldn't? I know one thing for certain, I'm going to try harder to get published from this day forward.

My race to finish this in between school, finals and the everyday drama of life impressed on me that if you make time for the things you love everyday, you can be happy. Even an hour everyday can make you feel so much better about yourself. If you have an hour, hour a half every day to yourself you can finish NaNoWriMo too. Or make a birdhouse, paint a picture, sew a tapestry, fix a toaster, or do something that just makes you feel good about being you.

Saturday, November 21, 2009

NaNoWriMo

So, I'm participating in NaNo this year. It's my first year doing so and so far I'm on track to finish on time.

*pause for applause*

Now, at some point the story will go up on fictionpress or here on the blog, but I don't know when.

So instead I shall put up an excerpt and the synopsis for your reading pleasure.

The Grave Watchers

Death rides a pale horse, and she is a beauty. Since man first buried his dead, she has watched over them. With her hand she raises those select few, those disturbed and maimed, to new life. These risen souls duty bound to protect the souls still buried and resting. The souls restless and walking.

Sebastien Crowle is such a watchman. But as a villain so profane and perverse enters the scene with a crime the likes of which Sebastien has never seen, can he stop the villain and confront the ghosts of his own past as they begin to rear their heads?

Excerpt

When I was entombed, London had no cars, no power lines, no mobile phones. My parents wept over me, their only child. I was young to die, even then, at twenty-three.
But in truth, a spark of life was left in me. So when grave robbers came and pulled my body from my tomb, I tried to call out for my father. No noise escaped my lips, and the robbers, mad and monstrous in deed and thought, pulled each and every tooth from my mouth. I had been told my teeth were lovely, so here these men saw an opportunity for profit.

They left me on the floor, they had no respect for the dead or the grieving. I wept silent tears at the thought of my family seeing me thus. I kept calling. A second night, and then a third. It was on that third night that my father found me, and he cried such tears. He himself replaced me in my tomb lest my mother have to bear the terrible sight. As a man of God, he prayed for my peace and soul. As my father, he prayed that too that retribution be done to those that would commit such crimes.

I don’t know if it was God, angels, devils or Death herself that took an interest, but on the seventh night, my eyes opened, my heart beat, and my lungs took breath. I felt teeth grow into my mouth with an ache and tear and at the last feeling returned to every extremity.

I rose from the dead.

My name is Sebastien Crowle, and I am a Grave Watcher.

“Mrs Gorman, as I’ve told you many, many times; I don’t have a pet. You’ve
searched my apartment several times now and it’s getting very tiresome.”

Mrs Gorman was a cranky, arthritic seventy-two-year-old with white hair cropped into short curls and rheumy brown eyes set into a face reminiscent of my third cousin Sheridan’s pet bulldog Mince. She tended to hunch and it did make her look like an evil witch. Today she wore a flower printed dress not especially different from the day’s past. I’m not saying she was all bad, just on days ending with Y.

She hated animals. Cats, dogs, parrots, hamsters, snakes, her hatred didn’t discriminate.

“I heard an animal in there,” she grumbled, “I know I did.”

“Hearing things is one of the first signs of dementia Mrs Gorman, are you scheduled to see a physician any time soon?”

“I will discover that animal Mr Crowle.”

“Of course Mrs Gorman—and now, I am on my way out.” I slid around her with a bit of a bow and slipped down the hallway with its peeling floral wallpaper. There were then four flights of stairs down to the ground floor to quickly check the little metal locker the postman put my mail in.

It contained the usual flotsam of adverts, junk, and bills. I threw away the junk and tucked the bills into my pocket. I felt a bit guilty about lying to Mrs Gorman again, but Bones wasn’t exactly a pet, and in any case, he wasn’t exactly alive. I found him many years ago and he decided to follow me. I liked the company and he did keep our residences free of mice. As far as I know he couldn’t eat them, but he did like to catch them.

The weather was foul, which made me think fondly of home. It would be years before I was to go back to London. I pulled the hood of my coat up over my head to keep off the rain. The winter was starting to creep up on fall, and soon the rain would be snow and things would become more difficult, and in some ways, simpler.

Few people dug up graves in the winter, but more spirits came out of the woodwork. I had a theory about that actually. Winter meant the holidays, which meant heightened emotion, an all of that emotion attracted the dead. The same seemed to be true of Halloween and Panic Day (which is March the ninth).

Thankfully, the only things that rose on other holidays were weak spirits jealous of the living and family spirits that wanted to celebrate. The only holiday I preferred not to work was Saint Valentine’s, too many love-struck and heartsick dead. They were a very depressing group.

Today was a Sunday, or I would not have been up before sundown. But my father had been a vicar and for my part I still took the time to attend Sunday Mass.

It wasn’t a whole lot of time from my day, and it wasn’t as though I didn’t have time. I walked to the church, down a broad, tree-lined street that was one of the main reasons I enjoyed living here. I didn’t know the name of the street, or even the name of the town, but I loved the trees.

My mail, such as it was, managed to find me with very little address. When I was in the larger cities, I tended to address more carefully. But in this time and place, I did not. Wet, yellow, maple leaves crunched under my feet and I was glad for my good boots that kept the wet out so well. Water dripped from my hood and onto the front of my coat to ride along the brown leather length down to my calves and drip off the hem and onto the grey concrete sidewalk.

The cemetery came out of the rain and the spirits flittered about, unseen to the churchgoers starting to file in through the open doors from the parking lot. The automobiles in the lot neatly parked. The automobile was one of the things I couldn’t wrap my head around, and as such I did not drive. There was this affectation with rush in this century I did not like.

I preferred to take my time. Why drive when I could walk? Really, I didn’t even like to take the bus. If I had to travel, I took a train, or a boat. I wasn’t completely behind the times though, I did own a telephone and a radio. Though most modern music disturbed me I had found a liking for the ballads of Queen for pure irony and some of the newer “rock” stars were very good.

Television, however, was only good for educational purposes, and I would rather read. I’d enjoyed some of the earlier programs, but this recent fascination with “reality” television programs was off-putting. I suppose I am a bit old-fashioned.

I waved to a friendly spirit, and then, all of a sudden, a gruesome figure staggered out of the cemetery, groaning. Skin was peeling from his bones and blood
dripped from his fingers.

“Hello Bernard.”

The spectre straightened and then pouted, “Aw, Sebastien, you were supposed to be scared.”

“I’m very sorry Bernard, but I can’t take seriously when your shoe is untied.”

He looked down at his trailing laces and groaned.

“I keep telling you, taking care with your appearance matters. Who will be afraid of a ghost with untied shoes?”

“No one looks at shoes.”

“I did.”

He shuffled his feet, “You’re different…you’re Sebastien.”

“And?”

“All right…I’ll do better next time.”

“Good. I’m sure, one of these days, you’ll manage to scare me.”

He perked up a little then, “You think so?” A bit more skin peeled off as he smiled.

“You have a lot of potential, Bernard. And now, I have to go to Mass.”

“See you next time then,” Bernard faded a bit and drifted back to his grave.

I smiled my smallest of smiles and hurried into the church.



That's it for now. Cheers!

Sunday, November 1, 2009

There was a rabbit.




So, for the last week I've been in England, mostly London, but also took a side trip to Bath. In Bath, I saw a grown man chain up a rabbit, put it in a sack with weights, and toss it in the River Avon. We all counted to five.

It's okay, though, the rabbit escaped.

A picture of the rabbit's offspring shall be up eventually.



I also spent a few hours in Pisa prior to my flight to London, and it was nice. The tower was a bit smaller than expected though. Amon--my little Puki--was also not impressed.

Anyway, while in London I saw the original manuscript of Alice in Wonderland, as well as the original Jane Eyre. A Gutenberg bible, some of the other first books ever printed on a printing press, the Parthenon Marbles, the Rosetta Stone, Etruscan and Greek and Roman pottery, jewelry, etc. And loads of other culturally important things.

But of course, the most important thing is that I saw the original Alice in Wonderland. I mean, come on.



We also went to Stone Henge(It was awesome and the weather was gorgeous), which brings me to the surprise of our trip. We had the most beautiful weather the entire time. It's rained this last day, but it always seems to rain on travel days.



There were two ghost walks(one in London on Halloween and one in Bath the night before), a Jack the Ripper walk, and a visit to the Sherlock Holmes Museum and 221B Baker street. We drank water at the Roman baths in Bath and talked to a conservator who was repairing some of the original paving. On a side note, if you go to the Roman baths in Bath, please don't lean, kick, or pick at the walls. They have orignal Roman plaster on them and are very fragile!

I read a few books, Magic Study by Maria Snyder, the first three Darren Shan books, and one I really recommend for newbie writers, Some Writers Deserve to Starve. It's got great tips for making it in the publishing industry and I picked it up for only £2.99 (as it's usually £10.99 this was awesome). It has some great reference sites too.

Let's see, I also went to the movies a couple times as it was my birthday this past week and I needed to distract myself from feeling old. Went to see the Vampire's Assistant, I liked it overall as a popcorn flick with some interesting lines. I'd watch it to write to. (For those of you that don't know me well, I tend to write while watching movies. The background noise is good, and sometimes I tend to think of something when I'm watching that leads to a plot-point. I also listen to music sometimes.) We also saw The Fantastic Mr. Fox, which(as I've not read the book) I had no idea what to expect beyon Dahl's quirks. I liked it as well, I don't think I could write to it, but we'll see.

Up next I'll be reading Fire Study by Maria Snyder and the next Darren Shan trilogy. I'm working on my Post-Bacc degree in Art Conservation right now, which means I'm writing this insanely long thesis paper on the History of Restoration in regards to Gothic Bibles(yeah, that's my title), and I'm busy researching. If you have any research suggestions, feel free to poke me with them. I'm also doing a large scale test audience for Legion's Web, my work-in-progress novel for the last four/five years. This is my final polish up before I send it off to Immanion Press(a publishing company whose books I have to recommend you look up).

Anywho, I'll have pictures up to accompany all this eventually. Oh, and I'm now on fictionpress.com under the name HemlockKey, where a good deal of fun new stuff is posted. I've got a bit of something for everyone, but be warned, I don't write for younger audiences in general, so always check the rating and my Bio which will have relevant information regarding each story.

In any case, that's it for now. Cheers.